Public Release 0.1602.1: Nozomi Reversal Storyline (New Path!)
Hi, everyone!
During these past weeks I've been working on a second path for Nozomi's Reversal storyline, which I'm sure will be of interest to a lot of you. I had to rush it terribly to get it written in time, but there's a conclusion of sorts so I'm excited for people to check it out~
To see the new writing, start Nozomi's route and when she asks, let her direct things for a while and tell her you loved it. Then during the "turning the tables" roleplay, make sure to ask Nozomi to do a striptease for a slightly altered set of events that ultimately lead to... well, you'll see. I'm being a little vague out of consideration for spoilers, but if you need more help finding the new content please check the flowchart guide in the attachments below and look for the parts marked in green.
Oh, and I also had a lovely new CG made to close out Sayori's storyline from last month, so do check that out~
For next month, I'm wanting to smooth out the rough edges in the new story path's script and then get a CG made for its ending before I think about the next writing task. In the meantime I hope you enjoy the new content and I look forward to having more to show off real soon :)
What's New
- WRITING: New path added for the Nozomi Reversal storyline, including a roughly-scripted ending
- ART: New CG added for the Sayori Alter story path ending
- ART: New CG assets added for the Nozomi Reversal storyline
- Word count is now over 402,500
- LOCALIZATION: Spanish script is up to date, with various small edits made to the earlier script
- Minor typo and grammar corrections
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A visual novel where you hypnotize cute girls and feel bad about it (in development)
Status | In development |
Author | Angela DeMille |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | 2D, Anime, Erotic, girls, high-school, hypnosis, mind-control, Multiple Endings, Singleplayer, Story Rich |
Languages | English, Spanish; Latin America |
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Just played through the new content and have definitely found my new favorite path. Loved the writing and how the hypnosis was handled, although it does make me wonder what happened during the parts Kyou can't remember to make things end so differently compared to the route before.
I liked the "It feels so good to be..." ending. Scary and a good alternative to "...I'm thinking about..." Poor Risa. But I want to see her and Nozomi's mom hypnotized more.
By the way, Innovator123 is good making face and body expressions. The rol party was lovely.
Oh, very nice. Really enjoyed Nozomi as the hypnotist.