Public Release 0.1598.1: More Sayori Alter Storyline Progress


Hi, everyone!

As expected, my work on Sayori's latest Alter story path continued with this update. I was able to turn a lot of that rough dialogue and outline from before into some proper script and, following some of the feedback I got, reworked some of the earlier scenes too to keep the story somewhat more consistent. We also have two new CGs for this path, with one appearing in one of its earliest scenes and one in the most recently-written. See what you think!

For next month I'll continue working on this story path now that the finish line's in sight. There's just one big scene to come which could be a ton of fun to close with, but it's going to be some challenge to write. See how I get on in August and in the meantime, please enjoy this month's release~

What's New

  • WRITING: Some additional script and editing for Sayori's Alter story path
  • ART: Two new CGs added for the Sayori Alter story path
  • Word count is now around 399,000
  • LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
  • Minor typo corrections

Files

Penlight Public Release 0.1598.1 (PC & Linux) 365 MB
Jul 08, 2023
Penlight Public Release 0.1598.1 (Mac) 352 MB
Jul 08, 2023
Penlight Public Release 0.1598.1 (Android) 381 MB
Jul 08, 2023
Penlight Flowchart Guide (Spoilers) (0.1598.1) 1.9 MB
Jul 08, 2023

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