Public Release 0.1598.1: More Sayori Alter Storyline Progress
Hi, everyone!
As expected, my work on Sayori's latest Alter story path continued with this update. I was able to turn a lot of that rough dialogue and outline from before into some proper script and, following some of the feedback I got, reworked some of the earlier scenes too to keep the story somewhat more consistent. We also have two new CGs for this path, with one appearing in one of its earliest scenes and one in the most recently-written. See what you think!
For next month I'll continue working on this story path now that the finish line's in sight. There's just one big scene to come which could be a ton of fun to close with, but it's going to be some challenge to write. See how I get on in August and in the meantime, please enjoy this month's release~
What's New
- WRITING: Some additional script and editing for Sayori's Alter story path
- ART: Two new CGs added for the Sayori Alter story path
- Word count is now around 399,000
- LOCALIZATION: Various edits and corrections to the existing Spanish script
- Minor typo corrections
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A visual novel where you hypnotize cute girls and feel bad about it (in development)
Status | In development |
Author | Angela DeMille |
Genre | Visual Novel |
Tags | 2D, Anime, Erotic, girls, high-school, hypnosis, mind-control, Multiple Endings, Singleplayer, Story Rich |
Languages | English, Spanish; Latin America |
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